Reality Check by Peter Abrahams

So the author blurb tells me that Mr. Abrahams is an experienced author with several YA and adult titles under his belt, including two which received Edgar Award nominations. The writing in this new book, Reality Check, is decent and readable, but there’s something about it, something about the point of view, that is disconcerting, not quite believable, maybe, or just not quite right for me.

I’m wondering if all of Mr. Abrahams’ books are like this one, If so, he could be a big hit with guys, especially. Make no mistake, this book is written for, to, and about guys. The main character is a guy, sixteen year old Clay Laredo, a football player, a bright kid with bad grades, and boyfriend of Clea Weston, one of the smartest and richest girls in school. Cody spends the book scrapping, investigating, working hard, being tough. Clea, on the other hand, spends most of the book waiting to be rescued, and although we’re told repeatedly that she’s tough and “good at everything”, she only does something active once towards the end of the book. I don’t have any gripes about that characterization, but it does make the book very guy-oriented. We’re also told several times that Cody is “a bright kid”, but he comes across sort of slow and dimwitted, but well-meaning.

Other guy stuff in the book: some detailed football, some knock-down, drag-out fighting, a sprinkling of crude language (not much, but more than I want to read), an abbreviated car chase. One minor character is gay; he gets beat up. Actually to be fair, several people get beat up, including Cody. It’s a book probably best suited to the kind of guys who will grow up to read the kind of books my own dad read: John MacDonald, Robert B. Parker, Lawrence Block. Not my cup of tea, but some people prefer a cold beer.

Dystopian Reading

How I Live Now by Meg Rosoff.

The Roar by Emma Clayton.

These two books actually have quite a bit in common, although the tone in each is quite different from the other. Both books are set in a future dystopian England, war-ravaged and poverty-stricken. Both books emphasize the meaninglessness of war, with quite strong anti-war messages. And both books are about teens empowered to live their lives as they see fit, and to even change the world for the better, despite the idiocies and pure evil perpetrated by their elders.

How I Live Now was published back in 2004, and quite a few bloggers and others have reviewed it. It’s the story of an American girl who goes to England to visit her cousins and is trapped there by the outbreak of war. The narrator, Daisy, is annoying at first. She speaks, thinks, and writes in interminable, run-on sentences, and she’s obnoxious, sarcastic, and self-centered. However, her experiences in war time take care of her attitude, not to mention her borderline anorexia. (Daisy says toward the end of the book, “The idea of wanting to be thin in a world full of people dying from lack of food struck even me as stupid.”) Because I didn’t like Daisy and her paragraph-long sentences very much at the beginning of the book, I didn’t know if I’d like the book very much either, but I did. It ends in a satisfying, but solidly realistic, scene of True Love rewarded, and Daisy, surprisingly, has become an adult with the ability to give love by the time that final scene rolls around.

The ending to The Roar, I must warn readers, is not so satisfying. I’m wondering if we should stage a rebellion and tell the publishers that books that feature an obvious set-up for a sequel as pseudo-ending should also feature at the very least a warning label: “YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO FINISH THIS STORY FOR AT LEAST TWO YEARS. READ AT YOUR OWN PERIL.” THe Roar is a very good story but it doesn’t end so much as it stops, in mid-story.

The Roar is reminiscent of both Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card and of Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games. Mika and his twin sister Ellie are children with special abilities who are being trained by a malevolent government official for some sort of mission, but Ellie has been kidnapped and is assumed dead. And Mika is involved in a virtual game/competition called Pod Fighters that becomes more and more dangerous as he wins out over other competitors to go to the final round of the game, a game that may reunite him with his beloved sister or may end in death for both of them. I’d recommend this one to Hunger Games readers who are looking for another read and to video game afficionados who want a story with games and lots of action. Just remember that it doesn’t end . . .

Book trailer for The Roar:

Blue Like Jazz by Donald Miller

I thought that Rick Warren’s Purpose-Driven Life book was a decent introduction to the Christian life. I’ve listened to Mark Driscoll on youtube, and what I heard him say was exactly what I read in the Bible. I even thought The Prayer of Jabez by Bruce Wilkinson, if read as written, had some good insights on serving God and asking for Big Things from Him. So, what I’m saying is that I tend to give Christian nonfiction writers the benefit of the doubt and not be overly critical and picky. (Fiction is another matter.) I figure we’re following the same Jesus, and if something sounds a little off or immature, maybe the author just hasn’t gotten there yet or maybe I haven’t.

So, although I know I read something, somewhere, that made me think I wouldn’t like Blue Like Jazz, that it would be some kind of New Age reinterpretation of Christianity that made Jesus unrecognizable, I actually loved it. Mr. Miller was a bit disingenuous at times, acting as if he just didn’t understand what in the world those “fundamentalists” were thinking when they didn’t like his take on this or that, but I still thought the book was a revealing and mostly honest (as honest as any of us get) look at what being a Christian is like, at least what it’s like for Mr. Miller. (The idea, however, that changing the name of what we believe in from “Christianity” to “Christian spirituality” is going to do anything except confuse the issue is also rather simplistic and disingenuous.)

A few quotations to give you a taste if you haven’t read it already:

“I grew up going to church, so I got used to hearing about God. He was like Uncle Harry or Aunt Sally except we didn’t have pictures.”

“God is not here to worship me, to mold Himself into something that will help me fulfill my level of comfort.”

“Satan, who I believe exists as much as I believe Jesus exists, wants us to believe meaningless things for meaningless reasons. Can you imagine if Christians actually believed that God was trying to rescue us from the pit of our own self-addiction? Can you imagine?”

“If the supposed new church believes in trendy music and cool Web pages, then it is not relevant to culture either. It is just another tool of Satan to get people to be passionate about nothing.”

“If loving other people is a bit of heaven then certainly isolation is a bit of hell, and to that degree, here on earth, we decide in which state we would like to live.”

“The most difficult lie I have ever contended with is this: Life is a story about me.”

That last one, especially, is profound. Think about it.

Quick Movie Notes

Inspired by At a Hen’s Pace:

Sweet Land was recommended to me by someone, a blogger I think. It was a sweet little movie, set in 1920, in rural Minnesota, about a mail-order bride and her life and difficulties in the U.S. Since Inge is German, and the community she comes to join is mostly Norwegian, and since the U.S. has been recently at war with Germany, the difficulties are many. The kids found it somewhat confusing, but not inappropriate. Elizabeth Reaser who plays Inge is a beautiful and talented actress.

Amazing Grace is the story of William Wilberforce and the abolition of the slave trade in England. I saw it when it first came out in theaters, but Blockbuster offered me a coupon for a free movie, not a rental, but a previously viewed movie to own. I chose Amazing Grace, and tonight we watched it again. I found it not only educational, but moving and romantic and inspirational.

Computer Guru Son and I watched the movie Frequency the other night, and both of us found it stretched our ability to suspend disbelief past the breaking point. And I’m pretty good at “six impossible things before breakfast.” The most interesting thing about the movie, for LOST fans, is that one of the main characters is played by actress Elizabeth Mitchell who plays Juliet in LOST, and that the main character is named Jack Shepherd. Also, the movie is about time travel, or at least communication through time. Coincidence or is there some connection between this movie and the writers on LOST?

Speaking of movies, here’s a list from Inside Catholic of 50 Best Catholic Movies of All Time. I found it useful.

Identity Crisis

Fingersmith by Sarah Waters.

Little Face by Sophie Hannah.

I read these two thrillers back to back, and although Fingersmith is set in Victorian London, and Little Face takes place in modern day England, a village called Spilling, the two novels have quite a lot in common. Both books deal with themes of identity, stolen identities to be exact, and babies switched at birth. The reader of both books is also forced to switch points of view in different parts of the books as the author changes the narrative point of view and to decide who is lying and who is telling the truth. Both books are steeped in deception and double-crossing and lies and megalomania.

Unfortunately, although both books are absorbing page-turners, both also have issues. Fingersmith had me speed reading to see what would happen as the narrator in the first section of the book, a gamin of the London underworld named Sue, tells about the fraud that she and a young criminal called Gentleman are practicing upon an unsuspecting, and unmarried, lady, Maud Lilly. Sue is supposed to help Gentleman gain Maud’s confidence so that he can marry her and thereby gain her fortune, payable upon her marriage. However, things are not nearly so simple as they seem which why it takes 511 pages to tell the story. In fact, the first plot twist in this story made me laugh out loud; it was neatly done and perfectly timed. There were more twists and turns to come.

As I said, I was speeding along to see what would happen to Maud and Sue when I was brought up short by what I can only describe as “soft porn” at the heart of the story. It bothered me. I thought about giving up the novel, but I had too much invested in the characters. I’m still not sure that the decision to finish reading the book was a good one, even though the questionable portions were not extensive. To state the problem clearly, if a graphic description of lesbian sex will bother you, don’t read the book. Again, it bothered me.

Little Face had other problems. It was a really good story about a woman who comes home from her first trip out of the house two weeks after the birth of her first child to find that someone has taken her daughter and substituted another baby for her. And no one believes the mom, Alice; not even the baby’s father believes that the baby in the crib is not the same baby Alice and he brought home from the hospital. The story is intriguing and brings up a lot of questions, both plot-wise and in the ideas that keep replaying about fear and duplicity and sanity. However, I didn’t feel that the plot itself was resolved properly. Maybe I’m just dense, but I didn’t see how it was that one of the characters (being purposely vague so as not to spoil the surprises in the plot) changed into a different person with a completely opposite personality at the end of the novel. Little Face also has some bad language and sickening violence, but not so much that I couldn’t skim it and get on with the story.

Take it or leave it: I read two stories with absorbing plots, but also with major problems that sort of spoiled them for me. I did finish both of them, though. You may love either or both. Most all of the reviews I read were quite positive.

Other views:

Nymeth on Fingersmith: “Being so afraid of spoiling this book for others also means that unfortunately I can’t even say much about the themes, about what I found so brilliant, about why I loved it so much. But please know that I did love it—it’s one of my favourite reads of the year so far, and I seriously suspect I have found a new author to add to my list of favourites.

Caribousmom on Fingersmith: “I thoroughly enjoyed this novel which uncovers the sinister underbelly of the human soul. Gentleman is the perfect villain – handsome, mysterious and evil. Just when the reader thinks she knows where the story is taking her, there is a twist and it goes in another direction. No one is as they seem.”

Farm Lane Books on Little Face: “Unlike much of the crime fiction I have read recently this contained no unlikely coincidences. The plot was as realistic as it is possible to get, while retaining many clever twists.”

Books Read in August, 2009

Three Men in a Boat by Jerome K. Jerome. Semicolon review here.

Fieldwork by Mischa Berlinski. Semicolon review here.

Main Street by Sinclair Lewis. Semicolon review here.

Graceling by Kristin Cashore. Semicolon review here.

Forgive Me by Amanda Eyre Ward. I didn’t manage to review this novel, set in New England and in South Africa. It was readable, but I found it hard to connect with the characters.

Heart of a Shepherd by Roseanne Parry. Semicolon review here.

The Best Bad Luck I Ever Had by Kristin Levine. Semicolon review here.

Fingersmith by Sarah Waters.

Little Face by Sophie Hannah. A review of these two novels, Little Face and Fingersmith will be up by tomorrow. In the meantime, they were OK, but not without flaws.

Blue Like Jazz by Donald Miller.

Buffalo Moon by G. Clifton Wisler.

Comanche Song by Janice Shefelman.

The Wolf’s Tooth by G. Clifton Wisler.

Wild Things by Clay Carmichael.

Best Children’s Fiction of the Month: Heart of a Shepherd by Roseanne Parry.

Best Adult Fiction of the Month: Fieldwork by Mischa Berlinski.

Best (Only) Nonfiction of the Month: Blue Like Jazz by Donald Miller. I just finished reading thisone, long after everyone has been there, done that. And I was prepared to NOT like it, to find it shallow and silly, just on the basis of an impression I had from reading someone else’s thoughts about the book (I don’t remember whose.). It’s not really shallow or silly, and it made me think, the highest compliment I can give a book. Review-ish thoughts coming soon.

Heart of a Shepherd by Roseanne Parry

First you should know that this book was published by Random House. And the next obvious thing about this children’s novel is that it’s very Catholic. I am surprised, pleasantly surprised, to find those two aspects together: a book not only respectful of Catholicism and Christianity but actually featuring orthodox Christian religion published by a secular publisher.

Next surprise, Heart of a Shepherd is a book about the war in Iraq that is neither pro-war nor anti-war. Some of the most sympathetic characters in the book are officers and soldiers in the U.S. Armed Forces, and they are not presented as ogres or as misguided dupes. On the other hand the protagonist’s grandfather, a central character in the book also, is a Quaker and a pacifist. And he is not an idiot or an unpatriotic curmudgeon. It’s refreshing to read a book about war written for children that has no axe to grind, no political agenda, only giving children things to think about as they begin to process the fact of war and people being killed and injured in their service to their country.

A brief synopsis: Twelve year old Ignatius Alderman discovers the “heart of a shepherd” as he helps his grandparents take care of the family ranch when his father is deployed to Iraq. Nicknamed “Brother”, Ignatius is the youngest of five brothers, named for St. Ignatius, and searching for his own gift, talents, and career path. He’s not sure that ranching or military service, the two traditions that dominate his family, are truly his gifts, and although he learns to live up to his responsibilities, it will take a major crisis for Brother to find his own “right road” to maturity.

The book is rather quiet, the pacing slow and deliberate, like Brother himself. Even when the crisis I mentioned comes, it sneaks up on the reader rather than announcing itself with trumpets. I think this book will appeal especially to boys. In addition to its coming of age theme, it also has lots of little details about ranching life and rural Oregon and the life of a soldier in Iraq and even about chess that will capture the young man who’s interested in any of those subjects and make him pay attention to the larger themes in the book.

This first novel by author Roseanne Parry is a treat to be savored. I look forward to her next with great anticipation. I definitely hope to see this one nominated for a Cybil Award.

Postscript: Here’s a list I found at Ms. Parry’s website of ways that teachers can support the chilld of a deployed soldier. I thought it was a good list.

Where are the Hymns?

Well, the sad ending to the story of the Sad Mac is that the Top 100 Hymns List is trapped inside my Mac. I have no way to transfer the informaiton inside the Mac to another computer until I buy another computer. The computer I’m working on now is a Dell running Windows, and it’s so buggy that it takes me twice as long to write a post as it would have taken on my Beloved Old Mac (BOM). Since it would cost about $1000 to (maybe) fix The BOM, and since I don’t have $1000 spare dollars to fix The BOM or to buy a new computer, I do not know what to do about the hymns project.

I do have some of the hymns with their places on the list because I had already started drafts of posts about them. I have 35 more hymns to count down, and of those I can probably reconstruct about 20. Should I post the ones I have? Should I wait and hope that a miracle will let me back inside The BOM? Should I undergo hypnosis in order to try to remember the names and places on the list of the missing hymns?

‘Tis a puzzlement.

Linking in Agreement

To buy a skirt=torture: “My mental state slams into disaster mode. My eyes cross, my vision blurs. I feel unworthy, angry, and giddy all at once, at the same time as trying to get a grip. This is only the first store, and I can’t go home yet! I think of how annoyed at myself I will be if the day of the special occasion comes, and I have to assemble an outfit out of the stained, pilled rags and bags I already have at home. So I begin to try things on.”
This post at Conversion Diary details my opinion on shopping exactly. It’s not therapy; it’s torture.

Poetry Friday: John Betjeman

John Betjeman, Poet Laureate of England from 1972 to his death in 1984, was born on this date in 1906. He was a poet born out of his time, in a way; his poetry sounds more like that of Thomas Hardy or even one of his favorite poets, William Cowper, than it does the poets of the twentieth century, T.S. Eliot and his ilk. (“A precocious writer of verse, at the age of 10 Betjeman presented the manuscript of ‘The Best Poems of John Betjeman’ to his favourite teacher at Highgate, ‘the American master’, Mr T S Eliot.”) Betjeman studied at Oxford with C.S. Lewis, and according to this article, JB (as he was called) rather blamed Lewis for Betjeman’s failure to receive a degree from that institution.

JB, in addition to writing poetry, was a journalist, an editor, a broadcaster, and a film critic. He also campaigned tirelessly for the preservation of the architectural heritage of Britain, making appearances on radio and television to promote this cause. His poetry has a great sense of place and setting, probably due to his love for architecture and for history.

Here are the first two stanzas of his poem, Verses Turned . . .:

Across the wet November night
The church is bright with candlelight
And waiting Evensong.
A single bell with plaintive strokes
Pleads louder than the stirring oaks
The leafless lanes along.

It calls the choirboys from their tea
And villagers, the two or three,
Damp down the kitchen fire,
Let out the cat, and up the lane
Go paddling through the gentle rain
Of misty Oxfordshire.

Go here to read the rest of this quiet ecclesiastical poem about the church’s endurance.

Links to more Betjeman poems:
Myfanwy
Trebetherick
Back From Australia
Inexpensive Progress
Middlesex
Felixstowe, or The Last of Her Order.
A Subaltern’s Love Song
Youth and Age on Beaulieu River
Diary of a Church Mouse

Delightful poet. Very British and somewhat “churchy.” But not too serious or full of himself. I like his poetry very much. It’s unfortunate that he and Lewis couldn’t get along; they may be laughing about their erstwhile feud in heaven now.

In her Poetry Friday round-up post, Book Aunt remembers poet Karla Kuskin, who died last week leaving a legacy of playful poetry.