The Reinvention of Edison Thomas by Jacqueline Houtman

According to the author blurb, author Jacqueline Houtman “most enjoys writing sciency fiction for kids, where real science is integral to the story.” The Reinvention of Edison Thomas is certainly “sciency” in lots of ways. If you have kid who likes inventions and inventors, who is maybe a little geeky (in a good way, of course), who would enjoy reading about taking things apart and doing science to solve practical problems, Edison Thomas is the book.

Brief summary: Edison Thomas, Eddy, can understand lasers and eddy coils, but he doesn’t understand the actions and emotions of his fellow classmates in middle school. Eddy’s thought patterns and his limited abilities in social interaction are sometimes difficult and disconcerting to read about, but even when he is being bullied by the guy he thinks is his best friend, Eddy never loses sight of what is really important. He finds ways to make real friends and ways to use his talents in science and organization to help the community and to improve himself in the areas where he’s challenged.

I am somewhat fascinated by books that feature characters who are on the autism spectrum, but the real key to this book is the science. Eddy uses a lot of science principles to solve problems and help people. He’s quite an inventor, but reading people is hard for him. I was trying to think of other middle grade fiction books that feature science (not science fiction), but I’m coming up nearly blank.

There are the Einstein Anderson books by Seymour Simon, but all of those books are about ten or fifteen years old and probably dated.

The Evolution of Calpurnia Tate by Jacqueline Kelly from last year was full of biology and nature study.

Every Soul a Star by Wendy Mass had a lot of astronomy.

Lots of other books feature kids who like science, but there’s not much real science included as an integral part of the story.

What am I forgetting?

Homeschool Educational Opportunities

NASA is announcing the application process for High School Aerospace Scholars (HAS) for Texas students (juniors in high school). This unique program includes a free six-day residential summer experience. Applications must be submitted by November 15.

Humans in Space Symposium Youth Art Competition Youth 10- 17 are invited to submit their ideas about the future of human spaceflight and why it is important via visual, literary, musical or video art. The winning art will be displayed at the Humans in Space Symposium, to be held in Houston April 11-15, 2011. Deadline for submission has been extended to October 31, 2010.

To support the homeschool community, WriteGuide, the writing curriculum source that I reviewed last week, founded the Homeschool Literary Quarterly, an online publication that will publish and promote literary works written by homeschool writers. We’ll publish poems, essays, stories, memoirs, and articles. The publication will be 100% free. Like any literary magazine, The Homeschool Literary Quarterly is very much a community endeavor. The magazine will need skilled writers to submit their work for publication. They will need artists and eventually, student-editors. The first edition will be out by Christmas!

Sunday Salon: Autumn is My Favorite Season

Vagabond Song by Bliss Carmon
THERE is something in the autumn that is native to my blood–
Touch of manner, hint of mood;
And my heart is like a rhyme,
With the yellow and the purple and the crimson keeping time.
The scarlet of the maples can shake me like a cry
Of bugles going by.
And my lonely spirit thrills
To see the frosty asters like a smoke upon the hills.
There is something in October sets the gypsy blood astir
We must rise and follow her,
When from every hill of flame
She calls and calls each vagabond by name.

Dawn celebrates falling leaves with crafts, books, art, science projects, nature study, and tea in this post from 2006.

Jama Rattigan has a recipe for Autumn Garden Soup and a follow-up post on Autumn Picture Book Soup.
And here Ms. Rattigan celebrates orange goodness.

Christ and Pop Culture: An Autumn Playlist

A is for Autumn and also for apples: 100 Apple-y Activities for Home and School.

Celebrating autumn (the Waldorf way) at The Magic Onions.

Carrie at Reading to Know reviews Kitten’s Autmn by Eugenie Fernandes.

Coffee Books Tea and Me Autumn Decorations. Brenda’s Autumn Decorations At Coffee Books Tea and Me, Part Two.

100 Pumpkins: A Celebration of All Things Pumpkin-ish.

In November 2006, Semicolon celebrated the Pecan, King of all nuts with a series of posts.

Autumn 2006-2007 at Semicolon.

It’s still rather warm and summmery here in Houston where summer can extend its sweltering tentacles into October and even early November. My plan is try to entice Autumn into southeast Texas with a series of blog posts this week on autumnal themes. If you have a post at your blog on autumn, autumn reading, fall fun, fall recipes, anything seasonal, leave a comment and I’ll link to your post. Meanwhile, enjoy the links above, and especially enjoy the days the Lord has made.

Saving Maddie by Varian Johnson

Talk about mixed feelings—and mixed messages. Seventeen year old Joshua Wynn, the narrator of Saving Maddie, is a PK (preacher’s kid). He sings in the church choir, visits old folks in the nursing home, and presides over the church youth group. But he doesn’t really know what he believes or why he believes it. He knows the he shouldn’t use foul language, and he doesn’t, but why not? Joshua couldn’t tell you. He knows he should go to church and obey his parents. But he can’t say anything to support those beliefs, except quote you a Bible verse. He knows that premarital sex is wrong, but why? Joshua hasn’t a clue.

It’s not surprising, then, that when Joshua sets out to help his old friend Maddie “see the light” and come back to the faith, Joshua is the one who is most influenced and changed and pulled away from the shell of a moral code that he had at the beginning of the story. Joshua says at several points in the story that he thinks he can save Maddie. So his first mistake is that he thinks he is capable of “saving” someone; salvation in the Christian sense of the word is strictly God’s province. I don’t recall Joshua praying at all in the course of the story, although bad girl Maddie does pray before meals and say that she’s “spiritual but not religious.” Joshua is obviously a mixed up Pharisee with no moral core to his churchiness and no real relationship with Jesus Christ. He’s a good kid with no real reason to stay good. He and Maddie need authentic Christianity modeled for them, Christ made flesh in the lives of Christians, but all they get are platitudes, goodness for the sake of appearances, judgment, and confusing theology from their parents and other adults in their lives. And of course, all the kids they know are either “doing it” or at the very least see no reason why any sane person would remain sexually abstinent until marriage. So nowhere in the entire book does anyone give any coherent rationale for sexual purity.

That said, Joshua is a pretty good example of what our churches and Christian homes are turning out. I’m not sure my own teenagers could give a reasoned Biblical argument for sexual purity or articulate their own Christian beliefs in a way that would make sense to others with differing beliefs. (I’m not talking about converting others, but rather just knowing what you believe.) Sadly enough, I’m finding that you can lead a horse to water . . . Perhaps author Varian Johnson made his protagonist, Joshua, so clueless and ignorant because he saw that many if not most Christian young people from strong, faith-filled homes are in the same place as Joshua. If anyone is talking to them about not only what the Bible teaches but also why they should obey its strictures, they’re not buying. And many, many who have professed faith in Christ have never come to an intimate relationship with Jesus that makes them eager to please him and reluctant to disobey His words in Scripture. That relationship and faith walk are the only things that are sufficient to enable a young person (or an old person) to resist sexual temptation or any other kind of temptation.

So Saving Maddie is a picture of how the world is, without any pointers to how it could be or why it should be better. Maddie is a tragic figure who does need saving. So is Joshua. But by the end of the book they’re both still drowning. One could call this story of teenage confusion authentic, or perhaps it’s just sad.

Sidenote: I don’t want to start another cover controversy, but I really couldn’t figure out whether the characters in this novel were black or or not. Mr. Johnson is black. Certain things—the pastor’s name, the name of Joshua’s church, other minor details—led me to believe that the characters in the book were black. And Joshua mentioned Maddie’s “brown skin” at least a couple of times in the book. However, the girl on the cover of the book doesn’t look black or brown to me; she looks like a white model with some shadow on her skin. However, I found this interview where author Varian Johnson discusses this very issue, and as he says, I don’t suppose it really matters what skin color the characters have.

Turtle in Paradise by Jennifer L. Holm

Readalikes: Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain, Soup by Robert Newton Peck, The Great Brain by John D. Fitzgerald, Flush by Carl Hiaassen.

Related Movies: The Goonies, Little Rascals, Annie, (NOT Shirley Temple).

Song: Mississippi Squirrel Revival

Key West, Florida, June, 1935.

Take one eleven year girl named Turtle with eyes as “gray as soot” who sees things exactly as they are. Plunk her down in Key West, Florida with her Aunt Minnie the Diaper Gang and a bunch of Conch (adj. native or resident of the Florida Keys) relatives and Conch cousins with nicknames like Pork Chop and Too Bad and Slow Poke. Leave her starry-eyed mama back in New Jersey keeping house for Mrs. Budnick who doesn’t like children and dreaming of being married to Archie, the encyclopedia salesman. Add in an ornery grandmother that Turtle didn’t know she had and a cat named Smokey and a dog named Termite.

All of that put together by author Jennifer L. Holm makes a story that reminded me of the above movies and and books and song but at the same time had its own feel and flavor. Turtle is a great little anti-Pollyanna who hates Shirley Temple and knows that “kids are rotten,” especially boys. The Diaper Gang is the Conch version of Our Gang with a wagon for babysitting bad babies and a secret formula for curing diaper rash. And if you’re a fan of the movie The Goonies, you should enjoy Turtle in Paradise, and vice-versa.

I leave you with a recipe from the book that gives you yet another comparative flavor and indication of the appeal of this story:

“After we finish swimming, we have a cut-up. A cut-up is something these Conch kids do every chance they get. Each kid brings whatever they can find lying around or hanging on a tree–sugar apple, banana, mango, pineapple, alligator pear, guava, cooed potatoes, and even raw onions. They cut it all up and season it with Old Sour which is made from key lime juice, salt and hot peppers. Then they pass it around with a fork, and everyone takes a bite. It’s the strangest fruit salad I’ve ever had, but it’s tasty.”

Poem #34: She Walks in Beauty by Lord Byron, 1814

“No one should be a rhymer who could be anything better.”~George Gordon, Lord Byron

She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellowed to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.
One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impaired the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o’er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling place.

And on that cheek, and o’er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!

“On the evening of June 11, 1814, Byron attended a party with his friend, James Wedderburn Webster, at the London home of Lady Sarah Caroline Sitwell. Among the other guests was the beautiful Mrs. Anne Beatrix Wilmot, the wife of Byrons first cousin, Sir Robert Wilmot. Her exquisite good looks dazzled Byron and inspired him to write She Walks in Beauty. She was apparently in mourning and wearing black with silver accoutrements (like a starry night).”

Byron is not the right man to be writing of “a heart whose love is innocent” as far as I can tell. He once said, “Every day confirms my opinion on the superiority of a vicious life — and if Virtue is not its own reward I don’t know any other stipend annexed to it.” He rather reminds me of Oscar Wilde, fond of elegance and of shocking people both with his actions and his observations. He is said to have had sex with over 300 women, and probably several minors, both boys and girls, a fact which takes some of the beauty out of the poem for me. I know one is supposed to dissociate the writer from his work and enjoy the poetry for what it is, but I can’t do that with either Byron or Shelley. They were both good-for-nothing cads, and the flavor of their lives gets into their poetry somehow.

Anyway, it might be a lovely poem if no one had ever told me anything about the poet.

You can read more about Byron if you’re so inclined:
The Life and Work of Lord Byron at Englishhistory.net
George Gordon, Lord Byron: Byromania

Hip Hip Hooray for Cybils!

I’m honored and excited that I get to help choose the finalists for the Middle Grade Fiction category for the Cybils awards again this year. And look who I get to work with:

Panel Organizer: Kerry Millar, Shelf Elf

Panelists (Round I Judges):

Ashley Bair and Alysa Stewart, Everead
Jennifer Donovan, 5 Minutes for Books
Sherry Early, Semicolon
Melissa Fox, Book Nut
Kyle Kimmal, The Boy Reader
Sandra Stiles, Musings of a Book Addict
Cheryl Vanatti, Reading Rumpus

Judges (Round II):

Amy Baskin, Euphoria
Eric Berlin, Eric Berlin
Jill Foltz, The O.W.L.
Kerry Millar (see category organizer)
Karen Wang, Kidsmomo

(The following is stolen shamelessly from Melissa at Book Nut who stole it from Natasha at Maw Books. It’s really more like perpetuating the goodness than actual theft, right?)

What You Need to Do – Your Checklist
  • Subscribe to the Cybils feed.
  • Follow @cybils on Twitter
  • Get some Cybils bling for your blog if you have one.
  • Buy Cybils bling for your home or office.
  • Spread the word! Particularly if you are a librarian or a teacher – get the Cybils into your schools & libraries!
  • Beginning October 1st and ending October 15th- NOMINATE your favorite book published in the last year in nine different categories. Titles must be published between Oct. 16, 2009 and Oct. 15, 2010. Books must be published in English or bilingual with English. Only one nomination per genre per person. ANYBODY can nominate a title.
    • Easy Readers and Short Chapter Book
    • Fantasy and Science Fiction
    • Fiction Picture Books
    • Graphic Novels
    • Middle Grade Fiction
    • Nonfiction Picture Books
    • Nonfiction for Middle Grade and Teens
    • Poetry
    • Young Adult Fiction
  • And last – get excited! Follow the nominations, read your favorites, make predictions, and check in when the shortlists and winners are announced.

Dates to Remember

  • October 1-15th: Nominations open to the public
  • New Year’s Day: Short Lists announced
  • St. Valentines Day: Finalists announced

The Passion of Mary-Margaret by Lisa Samson

Someone recommended Lisa Samson when I asked about favorite authors of Christian fiction, and I took the bait and borrowed The Passion of Mary-Margaret from the library. The novel was published by Thomas Nelson Publishers in 2009, and I must say I was surprised. Not only was the story absorbing and eminently readable, it was very Catholic. That’s not what I expected from an evangelical writer and an evangelical publisher. The book reminded of something as I was reading, and it was only after I finished that I realized what it was: it has a “Touched by an Angel” feel to it, only with a lot more Jesus than Touched By an Angel ever saw fit to indulge.

Sister Mary-Margaret is seventy years old, and she’s already anticipating the day when she will see God face to face. Since that day could conceivably come at any time, even though Sister Mary-Margaret is in good health, our narrator decides to write down the events of her life and the things she’s learned in the past seventy years.

Because Sister MM is getting older, she move easily between past and present, a fact which makes the timeline in the book a bit confusing in places. The story concentrates on what is happening in the present and moves without warning, sometimes with very few transitional signals, into the past and the events of Sister MM’s youth and the beginning of her life as a religious (similar to a nun). Then, the story takes a detour into the mystical as Sister MM has conversations with Jesus, a Jesus who appears whenever he wishes in bodily form and tells Sister MM whatever he wants her to know.

It took me a little while to get into the flow of Samson’s story and style. Sister Mary-Margaret’s voice is practical, somewhat humorous and irreverent, and at the same time spiritual in the best sense of the word. She’s in the world, but not of it. She’s fully aware of sin and suffering in this world, but also in tune with the heartbeat of Jesus and His love for His broken creation. I thoroughly enjoyed Samson’s story of the awakening and spiritual journey of this Catholic religious sister and her unorthodox journey with Jesus as guide. I’ll be looking for other books by Lisa Samson. Any suggestions?

More reviews of The Passion of Mary-Margaret:
Lisa at 5 Minutes for Books: “I have a little trouble with the mysticism contained in the story. Remember, I told you Lisa Samson likes to push the envelope a bit? Mary-Margaret sees Jesus, talks to Jesus (and He talks back), has tea with Jesus. I can’t decide whether this contributes or detracts from my personal endorsement of the novel.”

My Friend Amy: ” . . . this novel is so completely lovely, so full of reality and yet so bathed in the love of Jesus that it moved me deeply, and in short, makes me feel like a better person for having read it.”

Relz Reviews: “Brilliant characterisation by Lisa brings Mary-Margaret, Jude, Sister Angelica and every other character to grace the pages of this book, to tangible life with their failings and strengths authentically displayed.”

1776 and Forge: Serendipitous Reading

1776 by David McCullough.

Forge by Laurie Halse Anderson. Sequel to Chains by the same author. Nominated for 2011 Cybil Awards, Young Adult Fiction category. Nominated by Amy at Hope Is the Word.

I really didn’t plan it this way, but what a fortuitous sequence of reading events.

1. I am teaching U.S. History at our homeschool co-op. We’ve been reading about Jamestown, the Pilgrims and colonial life in general. We’ll be studying the American Revolution in about a week, or maybe two.

2. I finally read David McCullough’s 1776 about the beginning of the Revolution and all of the characters and events of the year 1776. I really fell for Nathaniel Greene, General Washington’s young Quaker-born protege, and Henry Knox, the stout young former bookseller turned artillery expert. McCullough writes vivid, informative history, and he makes the people of history especially full of life and approachable. I wanted to meet General Green and Colonel Knox. I cheered for them when things went well and felt sorry for them when they made mistakes which ended in tragedy. I did copy a few passages into my notebook as I read:

Washington to the army defending New York, August 23 1776: “Remember officers and soldiers that you are free men, fighting for the blessings of liberty—that slavery will be your portion and that of your posterity, if you do not acquit yourselves like men.”

New York, August 1776, on the lack of uniforms in the Continental Army: “In the absence of uniforms, every man was to put a sprig of green in his hat as identification.” I thought this brief sentence was so evocative of the David and Goliath nature of the fight, backwoods, country Americans, in their worn, homespun work clothes going up against the best-trained, best-equipped army in the world in their scarlet uniforms. And only a spring of greenery to identify friend from foe.

British General Grant after a British victory in the same battle of New York: “If a good bleeding can bring those Bible-faced Yankees to their senses, the fever of independency should soon abate.” It didn’t bring them to their senses, and the fever did not abate.

McCullough on General George Washington: “He was not a brilliant strategist or tactician, not a gifted orator, not an intellectual. At several crucial moments, he had shown marked indecisiveness. He had made serious mistakes in judgment. But experience had been his great teacher, and in this his greatest test, he learned steadily from experience. Above all, Washington never forgot what was at stake, and he never gave up.”

3. Immediately after I finished 1776, I started Laurie Halse Anderson’s Forge, a sequel to the award-winning Chains. These books are set during the American Revolution, a fact I knew since I read Chains last year, but I had forgotten that Chains ends in 1776 with the British in control of New York and our two protagonists, Isabel and Curzon, escaping from slavery and from a British prison into the wilderness of upstate(?) New York. Forge covers the time period of the winter and subsequent spring at Valley Forge 1777-78 where General Washington and his ragtag army spent a miserable time trying to survive and recover from their defeats and victories at the hands of the British army.

There are a few flashbacks that tell the reader what happened to Isabel and Curzon between their escape from New York and October, 1777 when the book actually picks up the story. Suffice it to say the two friends have not remained together, and Curzon is now on his own with no idea where Isabel is. This book evokes and enumerates all of the hardships experienced by the common soldiers at Valley Forge from the viewpoint of the lowest of the low, an escaped slave and enlisted man in the Continental Army. Curzon experiences prejudice, misunderstanding, persecution, deprivation, and near starvation, sometimes because of his skin color and also as a result of the deficiency of supplies and organization in the army as a whole.

My friend General Nathaniel Greene reappears in fictional form in this book. and the men are glad to see him! It seems, according to Halse Anderson’s telling of the story, that General Greene saved the day at Valley Forge and finally got the men there some food and clothing and arms. Greene’s wife, Caty doesn’t come off too well in the book, but I didn’t have a crush on her anyway.

So, friends, I would suggest that if you’re interested in the American Revolution and historical fiction set in that time period that you read the following books in the following order, by plan rather than by happenstance:

Johnny Tremain by Esther Forbes. This classic Newbery award-winning novel set in pre-revolutionary Boston gives a fantastic picture of the causes of the warand its effect on the people of Boston.

The Astonishing Life of Octavian Nothing, Traitor to the Nation: Volume 1, The Pox Party by M.T. Anderson. Semicolon review here.

The Astonishing Life of Octavian Nothing, Traitor to the Nation: Volume 2, Kingdom on the Waves by M.T. Anderson.

1776 by David McCullough.

Chains by Laurie Halse Anderson. Semicolon review here.

Forge by Laurie Halse Anderson.

Only one word of warning: Anderson’s story still isn’t complete. I read an ARC of Forge, and it won’t be out according to Amazon until mid-October. If you want the entire story you’ll have to wait and read all three volumes together when the third book comes out, whenever that is. By the way, I see that Laurie Halse Anderson will be at the Texas Book Festival in Austin in October. That would be fun to attend, but I don’t think I’ll be able to make it this year.

WriteGuide: Individualized Writing Instruction for Homeschoolers

About a month and a half ago, the director of Writeguide, an online writing course for homeschoolers, asked if I would be interested in reviewing their program here at Semicolon. I looked at the website, thought it sounded like something that would be of interest to many homeschool families, and asked if one of my urchins could do a trial run.

Karate Kid (age 13) was the guinea pig. He hasn’t done much formal writing, lots of reading but not much writing. We signed up for a one month course, and then promptly it got really busy around here and we managed to forget when the course started! (One month’s instruction at WriteGuide is $75.00, which would be a bargain for many homeschool families who often tell me how intimidated they are by the task of teaching kids to write.) Because it took us a few days to get on track in starting the program, and because I didn’t remind Karate Kid as often as I should have to communicate with his personal writing consultant, he was only able to complete one piece of writing over the course of the month. Nevertheless, I was quite pleased with both the process and the product.

Karate Kid’s assignment, an assignment that I gave him, was to write a process paper explaining how to do something that interested him. The WriteGuide writing tutor will work with your child on an assignment given by the parent, a writing task in the particular curriculum you are using, or a piece of writing that the writing teacher, the parent, and the child decide together that the child needs to complete. For example the homeschool parent could ask the WriteGuide teacher to work with the student on basics of the SAT essay or a research paper or simple paragraph writing, whatever fits the particular student.

Students enrolled in our Individualized Writing Course work with their own private writing teacher (called a writing consultant), Monday through Friday on papers and projects of their parents’ choosing. Your child’s writing consultant will provide 100% individualized, hand-tailored instruction to meet his or her precise needs as a writer. The course takes the form of a friendly, daily (Monday through Friday) exchange of letters, papers, instructions, lessons, and feedback between the student and his or her writing consultant. All aspects of the writing process, including generating ideas, prewriting, outlining, research, taking notes, drafting, controlling tone, sentence and paragraph structure, literary and stylistic devices, grammar, punctuation, mechanics, editing, proofreading, and the process of revision.

Students, parents and tutor communicate via protected, on-site email. As I said, Karate Kid’s writing teacher was great. She communicated with him daily, M-F, as long as he kept up with the assignments and revisions she suggested. (Sometimes he didn’t answer her for a couple of days, and therefore we may not have used the course to its full potential.) KK wrote a rough draft of his paper, and his WriteGuide tutor gave him specific suggestions to improve the writing, grammar, and structure of his paper. Here’s the end result: How To Make A Bird Bolas by Karate Kid. Remember that although KK is in eighth grade, he has done very little formal writing and had almost no writing instruction, although he has been taught basic grammar and sentence structure. And he has done a lot of reading.

Because I teach literature and history classes at our homeschool co-op, parents come up to me all the time in a panic about teaching writing. In fact, I see writing and science instruction as the two scariest subjects for homeschool parents who are entering the middle school/high school years. My new response will be to recommend WriteGuide as a resource for those who can afford it. Even if you can only do one month’s worth of instruction with WriteGuide, it would be a valuable month’s investment. I plan to sign up for another month’s writing consultation in the spring when KK writes his research paper.

WriteGuide also offers a three month long Introduction to Grammar class that I didn’t try out. However, if your child needs a basic foundation in English grammar, you should look at this course.